The Betrayal

Sirius Potter

Rating: NC17
Genres: Romance, Action & Adventure
Relationships: Harry & Hermione
Book: Harry & Hermione, Books 1 - 7
Published: 22/07/2007
Last Updated: 06/08/2007
Status: in_progress

The mysterious symbol of the Deathly Hallows appears. Harry, and Hermione betray the ones they have promised themselves too, can the wizarding world survive? Takes place after the epilogue.

Chapters

1. The Betrayal

2. Dinner at the Burrow

3. Busted

1. The Betrayal

A/N: This is the beginning to a epic romantic action fic in my head that would fix everything and it would start after the epilogue. However since I know I wouldn’t have time to finish the fic, and I dare say I have a terrible track record of this I have decided to just write this chapter. I hope this eases some of your hearts and souls, I know it helps mine. Now just one more thing, this takes place the night of the epilogue.

Disclaimer 1: I do not own the copyright on Harry Potter or hardly anything else for that matter. I do not intend to infringe on any copyrights.

Disclaimer 2: This story is NC-17 and for good reason.

The Betrayal

By: Sirius Potter

A man in his mid thirties, slowly and cautiously made his way up a long and beaten path. A wand held high over his head illuminating his path. After walking cautiously for a minute or two he knew it was safe and quickened his pace. This was an important “meeting” and one he was never late for.

After a few minutes of half jogging, and walking, a cabin came into view it was a rather nice cabin, it had its own private lake and all the land you would ever need for a first class quidditch game. There was a small gate around the cabin and on the entrance to the gate was a small sign that read OBHWF. The idea sickened the young wizard he alone had purchased the cabin, as a retreat for him and his young family, but within a week the whole Weasley clan had settled in. The man didn’t dwell on this thought for too long because he know of the treasure that awaited him just on the other side.

Just as the wizard predicted there was a treasure on the other side, a beautiful young witch about the wizards age was illuminated by the porch light as she leaned against the door waiting with anticipation. Her hair was long half way down her back chestnut brown and curly, not that god awful red the wizard thought. Her face looked young and happy, the man couldn’t believe how good the years had been to her. Sure wizards and witches aged much differently then muggles, but still the young man thought she was stunning.

“Oh Harry, will you hurry up I’m getting cold out here waiting for you!” The young witch shouted, her smile growing.

“Well Dr. Weasley maybe if you wore some decent cloths you wouldn’t be so cold.” Harry said pointing to her “outfit” it was nothing more the a small healer robe open in the middle, perfectly clinging to her curves.

“That is Dr. Granger to you Mr. Potter! You know damn well that I kept my maiden name.” The fiery young women snapped, and then changing her tone adding. “And why are you complaining about my robes?”

Harry blushed slightly and said “You know I’m not complaining…” Harry couldn’t finish his sentence for Dr. Granger had flung her self on Harry kissing him hard on his lips.

“Why…. Were….you…so….late?” She demanded in-between kisses.

“There was a small disturbance after we left Kings Cross station that I needed to attend too.” Harry said pulling away from Hermione.

Hermione looked slightly surprised at this bit of information. “Why did they need you though Harry?”

“Well sometimes even the head of the Aurors needs to get his wand dirty.” Harry said with a slight smile.

“Are you ok?” Hermione asked still slightly worried.

“Don’t worry dear, I handled it just fine.” Harry said pulling Hermione in for another deep kiss.

“Let’s go inside.” Hermione said pulling Harry into the warm cabin, there was a fire light in living room, and that was the only light.

In unison Hermione dropped her Healer robes, and Harry pulled off his Auror robes, and the rest of his clothes.

“Harry this is getting to hard I don’t know how much longer I can keep doing this.” Hermione said suddenly looking sad.

“Hermione anytime you want to say no, you know that I will understand” Harry said sweetly.

“You know that’s not what I mean. We have been meeting like this as much as we can for the past two years, I don’t want to stop, I need more. Earlier today when we all were at Kings Cross, and you were with Ginny, I needed you so bad Harry. You were so close but yet so far away.” Hermione said while moving closer and closer to Harry pressing her naked body up against his.

“Hermione we have discussed this…” Harry started but again couldn’t finish because once again Hermione started to kiss him, and pulled him over to a large overstuffed couch, where Harry fell on top of Hermione.

Harry started to kiss her deeper his hands slid down her body caressing her soft and subtle breast, and slowly moving his hand down to her midsection, but was stopped there.

“No Harry no foreplay, I have waited too long please Harry…” Hermione moaned has Harry was more then willing to grant her this request, and slid his member slowly inside of her, stretching her tight inner walls, until he was all of the way in. Hermione breathed out and smiled, looking up at Harry.

That was the sign Harry was waiting for, and he started to move in and out of her at a slow rate going faster only when he thought she could handle it.

“Come on Harry… I told you I have been waiting all day.” Hermione moaned as Harry quickened his pace. She grabbed onto Harry tightly and pulled him closer so he could go deeper into her.

The two held each other like that for what felt like an eternity until they both climaxed together. Smiling Harry picked himself up off of the couch, and off of Hermione. He then proceeded to wave his wand around himself thinking of the necessary cleaning spells. Hermione followed Harry’s lead and started to mutter the contraceptive spell and then something else.

“Wait, Hermione what other spell are you saying?” Harry asked quite intrigued

“Haven’t you noticed it before?” Hermione asked looking at Harry and then continued “It is a tightening spell.” Hermione finished and blushed profusely.

Harry couldn’t help but laugh at this “What! You don’t need that Hermione.”

“Well I guess it is just habit, Ron insists that I do it after every time, and um well I dare say that if I didn’t do it after you he would most certainly notice, he is quiet inadequate down there.” Hermione added her face growing a deeper shade of red.

Harry lost all control at this point and laughed harder then he had in ages. After seeing the look on Hermione’s face however he changed his mind and decided to hug her instead.

“It is getting late, I better stop by your place and pick up Hugo, I’m sure Ginny is getting tired of watching both Hugo, and Lily, and I know for a fact Ron wouldn’t have picked him up yet.” It was silent for a few minutes after Hermione mentioned Ginny, Ron, and the kids. Both were busy dressing properly to appear that this little meeting never happened.

“I will see you for dinner tomorrow at the Burrow.” Harry said kissing Hermione one last time before she left.

It was the normal routine Hermione would leave fifteen minutes to a half hour before Harry she would walk silently down to where the apparation wards were down, and Harry would rest on the sofa. Both of them would wonder what could have been.

A/N: Well I hope you like it, I know both Hermione, and Harry are to loyal to cheat on their loved ones, but what the hell after that epilogue in Deathly Hallows I think we all needed this.

2. Dinner at the Burrow

A/N: Well ok you all got me wanting to do this so here is another chapter. Please note that the story description and genres have changed.

The Betrayal

Chapter 2: Dinner at the Burrow

One big happy Weasley family, that is what Harry couldn’t help but think of as he sat and looked around the dinner table. The Burrow was always welcoming to Harry, and today was no exception. The days of Voldemort were long gone, sure being the head of the Aurors Harry had continued to fight the Dark Art’s, for as Servus Snape said they never die. Still it wasn’t like what it was back in the great war. There were petty crooks, and dark wizards here and there but nothing that couldn’t be dealt with. Life truly was good for Harry Potter.

To Harry’s left sat Ginny his devoted wife of sixteen years, she had always been loyal to Harry and took great care of his kids and his home. Next to Ginny sat Luna Dursley and Dudley Dursley, sure enough about five years ago at a victory anniversary Loony Luna Lovegood met Harry’s cousin Dudley and they immediately hit it off. Harry wished he could of seen Vernon’s face when Dudley told him that Luna was his wife, now almost five years later she was expecting their first child. Next to them sat Mr. and Ms. Weasley with the grandkids sitting in-between them Lily, and Hugo. Nothing new about Mr. and Ms. Weasley, Harry mused they would never change and Harry appreciated that. Next to them was Harry’s best friend Ron Weasley, now a middle man in the Magical Law Enforcement for the ministry. Finally to his immediate right sat Hermione Jean Granger. Sweet Hermione, Harry thought she was now one of the top Healers at Saint Mungo’s, and the women who Harry secretly loved above all others…

Unfortunately for Harry he couldn’t reflect upon sweet Hermione any longer for he was interrupted by his wife Ginny. “Harry… earth to Harry!”

“What?… Oh sorry Ginny, what did you want?” Harry asked sweetly looking at his wife.

“I wanted to know if you wanted anymore mashed potatoes? And just what were you thinking of?” Ginny demanded looking very much like her mother scolding at Harry.

“Oh sorry Gin, I was just daydreaming I guess.” Harry said slightly embarrassed

“Are you sure you didn’t bump your head yesterday during the little incident?” Ron asked jokingly

“No one can hurt my daddy!” Lily chirped

“Here here!” Mr. Weasley agreed and ruffled his granddaughters hair

“Harry what exactly did happen yesterday?” Luna asked in her sing song voice.

Harry choosing to ignore this question, instead asked Ron one. “Did you get a promotion Ron? You were in charge of a patrol yesterday.”

“Yeah well, when Copperfield bought it last week I was next in line for the spot.” Ron said slightly smiling he didn’t want to seem to happy about a collogue dieing.

“Oh Ron that is wonderful! You make us so proud!” Mrs. Weasley exclaimed and rushed out of her seat and practically squeezed Ron to death.

“Yes, we are all proud of Ron.” Hermione said squeezing Ron’s hand slightly before quickly withdrawing it.

“Harry I think Luna asked you a question and I am curious on the answer.” Ron asked eager to take the attention of off himself.

“You were there Ron, don’t you know what happened?” Harry asked

“Well yes, but once you went behind that barrier it sort of blacked out and none of us could make out what was going on!” Ron exclaimed

Harry sighed before raising his wand, and a rather large looking bowl zoomed to him. “I figured you would all want to know, and this will be much easier.” Harry then put his wand up to his head and pulled out the particular memory in question. “Um I think it would be best if the kids went outside to play.”

Lily and Hugo looked mortified by this, neither one of them and ever been inside a pensive before they were about to protest when Dudley stood up and said “I will take them outside, seeing as I’m a muggle, I probably wouldn’t understand half of it. Come on kids let’s go.” With that Dudley took his big boxing mitts that he called hands and led the kids outside.

As soon as the kids were outside, the remaining witches and wizards leaned over the table looking into the pensive when they all fell in they found themselves in the basement of a ministry building, were pensive Harry was instructing a dozen Auror trainees, Teddy Lupin being one of them.

“Come on Teddy I know you can do a better stunner then that come on everyone again!” Harry snapped being particularly hard on Teddy because he had learned to expect a lot from his godson, Harry himself teaching him almost everything he knew.

In unison on the order from Harry all twelve of the trainees pointed there wands at the targets on the other side of the room, and red bolts of light shot out of all their wands.

“Um sir…” a small wizard spoke up just entering the room.

Harry slightly started spun around, whipped his wand out and pointed it at the newcomer. “Oh it’s you Gary.” Harry said recognizing the frail looking wizard and re stowed his wand in his pocket.

“Um sir, there is a slight disturbance in downtown London that requires your expertise.”

“How small?” Harry asked his eyes intensely gazing on Gary, who had a knack at understating things.

“Well there is a team of MLE’s and Oblivorators on scene already, but there is some strange barrier that they can not get through, behind it are two wizards firing curses out from it and there is also a symbol in-between them on the wall of a muggle warehouse.” It looked like Gary didn’t want to explain anything more.

“What kind of symbol Gary?” Harry demanded

“Grindelwald…”

“The Deathly Hallows.” Harry muttered to himself. At this the entire clan of onlookers that Harry had brought into his pensive gasped.

“There is only two of them?” the pensive Harry asked

“Yes sir.” Gary said and nodded

“Ok thank you Gary, I will be going now then.” With that Harry turned and started to apparate.

“Wait sir, do you think we should come to help?” Teddy piped up looking slightly nervous. Teddy knew his Godfather well outside of work, were he was caring, and generous, but here at work, he was hard and demanding, so he was slightly nervous.

Harry almost smiled at his godson’s courage before answering “I don’t see why not, some real life experience would be good. But we should hurry, this sounds like it is out of the Magical Law Enforcement’s league.” With that all of the Auror trainees started to laugh and Harry chuckled as well.

Ron looked over at the real Harry and gave him a death glare, Harry and almost all of the other onlookers couldn’t help but smile at pensive Harry‘s joke.

Before they knew it the scenery changed and they were now in downtown London, watching pensive Harry and the Auror trainees walk towards a horrific scene. Two wizards were firing curses like crazy with there back up to a wall with the sign of the Deathly Hallows behind them.

“Harry! I’m glad you’re here, nothing that we fire at them works, there is some kind of barrier, we can’t even walk through it!” Pensive Ron exclaimed running up to pensive Harry and his group of Auror trainees.

“Well I will see what I can do. Can you watch over the trainees?” Harry asked slightly worried.

“Yeah, no problem Harry.”

Harry slowly made his way towards the magical barrier, trying to feel what kind of magic the barrier had. The two wizards seemed oblivious to Harry walking towards them, jets of light were still shooting out from behind the barrier. A orange bolt of light shot out one of the wizards wand and zoomed straight for Harry’s head. Harry flicked his wand and the spell turned around a zoomed back at the caster hitting him square in the chest, he let out a vicious scream and fell to the ground. This caught the other spell casters attention, who was now staring at Harry and smiling. His smile grew as Harry easily walked through the barrier without casting any sort of spell.

“So you still are the master of the Deathly Hallows!” The wizard exclaimed excitedly

“Just as I figured only the last one who controlled the Deathly Hallows could pass through this barrier.”

“Very correct Mr. Potter, now we duel!”

“Hold on, do I at least get to know your name?” Harry asked sarcastically

“Oh that is not important, I am just a servant of my Master.” Harry loved hearing this, the last thing he needed was another Dark Lord.

“Fine if that is how you want it.” Harry said sadly raising his wand towards the servant sending out a simple stunning spell to test the waters.

The wizard easily deflected it, turning his wand at Harry and a purple ball of light jumped out of his wand and rushed straight for Harry.

“PROTEGO!” Harry yelled casting a powerful shield charm, just in time. The purple spell pushed up against Harry’s shield charm, but was not deflected instead it tried to push through it. Harry’s shield held up however and finally deflected the wizards spell away.

Enough was enough Harry thought “Expelliarmus!” The disarming spell caught the wizard of guard, and his wand went flying from his hand, giving Harry yet another wand for his collection.

Harry slowly advanced on the wizard his wand still pointing at the unknown man. The servant was now shacking in his boots so to speak, he dived to the ground, grabbed his now unconscious friend and his wand, and then disapparated away.

“Well that’s it.” The real Harry said as everyone fell out of his pensive.

Ginny, Hermione, and Mrs. Weasley were all sobbing at this point.

“Man that is scary, do you think it is Voldemort?” Ron asked

“No…” Harry said brushing his hand over his scar. “Voldemort is dead, for good. This is someone, or something new.”

A/N: Well I hope you guys liked it. I need some help here now however. I don’t have many ideas in my head for this story. I know there will be more “betrayals” and I know how it is going to end but other then that I’m blank. Any ideas or suggestions can be left via review, or private message. Please R/R!

3. Busted

A/N: Well I am happy with the continued interest in my fic, so here is the next chapter. Oh one more thing in my fic James in sixth year, it never says in the epilogue what year he is in, though I believe he acted too immaturely to be in sixth year, so please no flames saying that there is no way James can be a sixth year.

The Betrayal

By: Sirius Potter

Chapter 3: Busted

James Potter walked casually down the hall with his three best friends; Dan, Rupert, and Dennis. They were the four Gryffindor male sixth years. Best friends since first year, they called themselves the New Marauders they even had the original Marauders map.

“So James you and Margret seem to be getting awfully close. I saw you two under the mistletoe” Dan said with a sly smile and nudged his taller friend.

“Margret! Come off it James isn’t she a little on the large side?” Dennis added laughing hysterically.

“Laugh all you want, you both know I wouldn’t touch her with my broom!” James retorted. “Now Rupert, I know you like the bigger gals… Rupert?” James asked slightly concerned his best friend was off in loony land.

“James isn’t that your brother?” Rupert asked pointing down a distant corridor where a little first year was being harassed by three older students.

James however did not answer he just dropped his school bag pulled out his wand and ran faster then his Firebolt Mach 3 could even go.

“Come on baby Potty Wotty, not as good as your dad!” A tall blonde seventh year taunted young Albus. He then raised his wand and fired a curse over his head and some ruble, and dust fell on Albus’s head and the symbol of the Deathly Hallows was engraved in a Hogwarts wall.

“…Ex..pell..iarmus…” Albus stammered trying to send a disarming spell out his attackers. When it didn’t work the three older boys wailed in laughter.

“Oh I guess your daddy didn’t teach you that one… let’s see what can I do oh yes..” The leader of the gang smiled wickedly.

“REDUCTO!” James yelled finally arriving on scene. His curse ripped through the tall blonde seventh year sending him flying back in severe pain.

The seventh years’ two friends then pointed their wands at James but before they could do anything Rupert, Dan, and Dennis caught up to James and all sent disarming spells at the two standing seventh years, easily catching their wands.

“You will pay for that Potter.” The blonde seventh year said pulling himself up off of the ground.

“I doubt it, I see you have picked up a few tricks, huh Rob?” James said pointing his wand to the mark of the Deadly Hallows. “Where did you learn how to do that?”

“Well I was visiting my cousins out east over the summer…” Rob started

“Oh I know all about your cousins at Dumstrung, you have been bragging about them since I was a first year!” James retorted

“Do you want to me to tell you my story or not Potter?” Rob snapped back, and without waiting for an answer continued. “ When my cousins where first years at Dumstrung they meet a seventh year, one of the best students the school have ever seen, he is good. Real good, better then your dad that is for sure.”

“Bullshit!” James yelled, he did not like where this was going.

“Yeah… Bullshit!” Albus broke his silence and added.

The conversation paused for a second and everyone did a double take on young Albus.

“So what, you meet up your cousins friend and learned about the Deathly Hallows?” James asked almost whispering the last bit.

Rob was slightly surprised that James knew about the Deathly Hallows. “So I see your dad has told you about the Hallows huh?”

“Well he is the… how do I put it the Master of Death.” James said smugly.

“Not for long Potter, Gor…” Rob stopped in mid sentence, he almost gave away the name of his “master”.

“Better be careful what you say, you wouldn’t want your cousins or their friend to find out that we know about them thanks to you. Though I guess just the three of them won’t be able to do much damage.” James boosted

“Ha! Three of them, I told you my cousins where in first year when the meet my our master. He recruited first through seventh years to be on his side.” With that bit of information James grew a rather large smile at this he knew his dad would need to hear about all of this.

“Enough! CONFRINGO!” Rob yelled sending the blasting spell at James.

“Protego!” James yelled just managing to hold a shield charm against the powerful jinx.

“Expelliarmus!” Albus shouted, trying to help his brother, and to the surprise of everyone a huge bolt of blue light shot out of his wand and knocked Rob back causing him to loose his wand to the little first year.

“STOP!” A magically amplified voice boomed. “No dueling in the halls!” The voice commanded, and then stepped out into the open, it was none other then Neville the herbology master, he flicked his wand and everyone who was involved in the duel suddenly lost their own wands as they flew into Professor Longbottoms outstretched hand. “You can all get them back from your head of house after you have explained to them what you’re doing.”

“Neville I need to talk to my dad it is an emergency!” James said excitedly pointing to the symbol of the Deathly Hallows.

Neville did a double take in-between James and the symbol on the wall. “Right come along quickly.” Neville said, as he and James set off at a brisk pace for the Professor’s office. Once they were out of ear shot Neville added “Seeing as I’m your head of house…” Neville said somewhat slyly and passed James his wand back. “Well here we are… Mandrake!” Neville said saying the password in front of a large statue of armor. “There is floo powder on top of the fireplace” With that Neville left to give James some privacy.

James rushed into the office and threw the powder into the burning fire but without stepping into it he yelled “Auror Headquarters” James then stuck his head into the fire and called out “GARY!”

There was a minute or two of silence until finally the frail looking wizard made his way to the fire. “Ah young Mr. Potter what can I do for you?”

“Is my dad here?” James said very rapidly

“No he went home over an hour ago.” Gary slowly replied.

Without even saying good bye James pulled his head out of the fire, threw in some fresh floo powder “Potter Mansion!” The fire blazed up again and James stuck his head into the fire, and yelled “DAD!”

James heard some movement and someone finally came into view it wasn’t Harry however it was his mom Ginny Potter.

“Mom where is dad?” James asked anxiously

“He is still at work James, it is only noon why would he be home already? What’s wrong…” But Ginny could not finish because James pulled his head out of the fire quickly.

“What the hell…” James muttered to himself. Almost on a whim James through some fresh floo powder into the fireplace and yelled “Potter Cabin!”

As soon as James stuck his head into the fireplace he knew he had the right place, he could hear noises upstairs. “DAD!” James yelled. As soon as James spoke there was a loud bang from upstairs and then some muffled voices, and finally Harry came dashing down the stairs looking slightly nervous.

“Oh it’s you, James what’s up?” Harry asked slightly more relaxed.

“What’s going on here?” James demanded he was definitely suspicious of his father.

“I’m just getting the place ready for Christmas holidays the whole family is going to be here starting next week.” Harry replied smiling slightly

“Harry who is it?” Hermione called from upstairs.

“What’s Hermione doing here?” James asked inquisitively

“She was at headquarters checking on one of the trainees and I ran into her on the way over, and she volunteered to help. What’s up with the twenty questions? How come you’re here any way, don’t you have classes right now?” Harry asked, nicely taking the pressure off of himself.

James seemed to relax as he realized his dad was making sense he knew his dad was to loyal to ever cheat on his mom. “Dad there was a symbol of the Deathly Hallows…” James must have talked for ten minutes before he finished recanting his tale to his father.

“So Albus disarmed him?” Harry asked amazed

“Yeah it was amazing Dad, it was a perfect disarming spell I didn’t learn that tell the end of first year, and it isn’t even Christmas yet and Albus mastered it!” James said quite proudly of his younger brother. “He is a Potter eh dad!” James added.

“He sure is son, now do me a favor tell Minerva that I will be there in a few minutes and I would like to talk to this Rob.” Harry told his son and with that James dissaparated to do his fathers bidding.

“HERMIONE!” Harry shouted, but he didn’t need to because she was already behind him.

“I heard everything let’s get Ron and we can all go. If this is happening at Hogwarts it concerns our kids too.”

“Alright lets, grab a hold and I will apparate us to Ron.”

“Harry we can’t apparate out of here, or to Ron’s office at the MLE there are apparation wards there and here.”

“Well that is the best part of being the head of the Aurors I can take them down when I want to.” With that Harry grabbed Hermione and with a loud crack Harry and Hermione were gone.

To say that the scene in front of them after they dissaparated was disturbing would be an understatement. Right in front of them laid too very naked people, on a overstuff couch in Ron‘s office.

“RONALD WEASLEY!” Hermione screamed as she pulled out her wand and magically Ron and the other naked person a very young witch were pulled away from each other.

Ron looked absolutely shocked, and the young witch looked like she was about to pee her knickers if she had any that is.

“Um, I will go myself…” Harry said and with another loud crack Harry apparate to just outside the grounds of Hogwarts.

Harry made his way up the beaten path in record time, trying hard not to think of the scene he just left. Finally he made his way to the entrance of the grand castle, he expected to walk right in but was stopped, by a group of teachers including Neville, and Hagrid, along with the Headmistress.

“I am sorry but I can not permit you go come into my castle, for the reason to interrogate one of my students.” Professor McGonagall said calmly to Harry.

“But Professor, this is important it involves the…”

“I know exactly what it involves Mr. Potter…” the Headmistress cut in.

“Damn it! No you don’t! My kids were attacked in there, and yes it does involve the Deathly Hallows.” Harry yelled ferias with rage.

“I am sorry, this is an internal affair, the student is being dealt with properly. I must say I am surprised by you coming here Harry, why you of all people have shown that the Ministry needs to stay out of Hogwarts business.” McGonagall said with the last bit on a more personal note.

“This school owes its continued existence to me! If it wasn’t for me Voldemort would have torn it apart long ago! I am going in!” Harry demanded his anger getting the best of him, and making him slightly cocky.

“Harry we are all here to stop you, if you force yourself in. Now if you were to come here for a different reason it would be different, you are always welcome, but just not like this Harry.” Professor McGonagall again said sweetly. The other Professors griped their wands tightly they expected Harry to attack, Hagrid was the only one who didn’t seem worried.

“I could get in you know…” Harry said almost threateningly

“I know Harry, I know.”

“I warn you Headmistress if any of my kids are hurt because of this kid again, I will be back, and it will not be for ministry business, it will be personal.” With that Harry turned sharply and marched himself off of the grounds.

A/N: Well I hope you all liked it, nothing much to say. I do have a suggestion for you guys, if you have not yet read Kingdom of Slytherian by Anime Redneck you really should. It is still short and only has a couple of chapters to it, but it is the most original story I have ever read, you will all love it!