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15/11/03

Hi everyone! Wait! Before you start chucking tomatoes, yes I know that I haven’t updated in a horribly long long time, but there’s a reason for that, a couple, as a matter of fact. See, there was the issue of my end of semester assignments which were due, then my final exams, then my birthday, then the fact that I’m working five days a week and then the fact that I am moving house IN THE MIDDLE OF MY EXAMS!! So yes…

I don’t really think anyone reads this until I actually tell you all that I’ve updated this page…but anyway, I’ll be back early next month…but I will try to update at least once before then… =)

Okay, so on with the thank you’s. My last post on this page was way back in August so that’s pretty scary, I am such a lazy bumm.

Anyway I’m glad to see some old faces and lots of new ones too, it’s good that my fic still inspires reviews even though I’ve dragged it out for such a long time, you guys are the best!

Thank you to:

LiTToWeaseL
frecklegirl87
Liz21
Resse Darling
Hermione Malfoy
Jaelyss
SnapesScooby
Gabrielle
Cassie
Faeriedust
dracoginnyr1
RuthieGranger
Jbo

You guys have been there every step of the way and I really really appreciate your support! Keep reading and I will try my best to keep you all happy…but mainly just annoyed haha =)

1FrostB4Winter Umm, okay thank you for your suggestion however, I’m sorry, there ain’t going to be no ‘hot kinky sex’ in the next chapter, I’ll try to incorporate the other stuff though =)

Anonymous I made Ron Head Boy coz I reckon he’s good enough, so there! =)
Anonymous Sorry, Megan is nobody, it’s supposed to be Naomi. When I was writing that chapter I had a change of mind about six times, so Naomi went from Jane, Judy, Megan to Naomi hehe.

Alethiana My commas? Haha alright, I will try to keep my eye out for them. Although, it could be the difference in the way or tone we read the sentences? Lol

Awen and Anasis Aww *hugz* for being my second biggest fan haha.

activist1974 I’m sure that there is always room for improvement in everyone’s writing, but the rating system is not designed for the reader to rate the author’s skill but rather the reader’s enjoyment of the fic. I think you might have misunderstood =)

Clair too short?! Well, I try to maintain all my chapters at the 3000words mark, but the next couple of chapters will be guaranteed long ones okay?

Crazy_kitten Welcome to fanfiction! Glad you reviewed my fic! And hope you keep reading!

Dracomio yeh…wouldn’t you just love someone like Draco to be in love with you? *sigh* hehe.

Emily Glad you like my Draco, I aim to please yah =)

Elly Belly Wow what a quick reader! Glad I had you hooked?

Ezmerelda Nah it’s alright, Ginny didn’t choose Harry over Draco, but he is just telling himself that because that way he doesn’t feel as bad about everything coz he can blame it on someone else. Hahaha no I assure you that you are more than sane hehe, but hey that’s a really big complement for me. I’m glad that my story gets you so caught up in it, I’ll keep up my efforts and try not to disappoint you!

Fireandice I’m glad you’re enjoying my fic! And thank you for your suggestion, I’ve made sure to incorporate it into the next chapter!

kneh13 I’m one of those people who love Slytherin more than I do Gryffindor. So yeh, I dunno, I just reckon all the Slytherins have some cool aspect about them, Pansy included. Hehe, glad you like her.

Kirixchi Don’t worry, I don’t believe Lucius is a child-abusing bastard, just a muggle-abusing bastard lol. And I totally support your L/N shipping, so don’t worry about it, have your fun =) Thank you for your suggestion, I have made sure to include it in the next chapter =)

Kristi Love your analysis of my Draco, he is that isn’t he? Hehe

Miman There, there, why would I make you cry? *angelic smile*

Naveah I’m glad you like my writing style and that my fic is believable, I try really hard! Thanks for your informing review!

Nmffnurse No actually, I’m still thinking about whether or not I should have Ginny finding out about the Naomi incident…But you know, she wasn’t the only one he slept with while she was away… *evil grin* Yeah I know what Pansy said might seem kinda harsh and scary but it’s the truth and Draco really does need to face it. I will be updating soon! So sorry to keep you all waiting!

the_girl_who_shouldn’t_be_named Glad you love my story so much haha, shall update soon to try to satisfy your impatience =)

Purpledaisey Yeh I don’t think Pansy was ever ‘off’ exactly, just the way she is portrayed I guess? Hehe. Thank you for your suggestion, I’ve made sure to include it in the next chapter =) I love praise about how the reader likes my characterization of Draco, thank you so much! You’ve been a great reviewer! And no, I’m afraid that Draco did not write to Ginny at all during Sixth year.

Syvixxe I don’t really know, but I guess she just enjoys it, calling him ‘Malfoy’ reminds her of the beginning before everything began and also the trials they’ve had to go through and are still going through I guess. It’s a fond nickname rather than a hostile greeting if you know what I mean?

Zilver Faerie Draco is really OC? Really? In what part?

Once again, I apologize for not updating in over a month, but i will soon! I've got pretty much most of the ending written up on my computer. Just gotta edit some bits and tie up some loose ends and then I'll post! okay? BTW, wish me a happy birthday! I got a gameboy advance SP hehe, currently playing Final Fantasy Tactics on it, ahhh the life of a bumm hehe!

Rea

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26th August 2003

Hi all, we've got one more chapter of Sixth Year to go and then it's the final year of Hogwarts! Yay, wow, I can't believe I've come this far already. Thank you to my lovely reviewers, you have all been such great support! *Hugz*

Thank you to:

Anna
Cindergirl
RoseWeasley
Your reviews were lovely and I hope you continue to read and review and most importantly, enjoy TsTr!
Also to:

1FrostB4Winter Gosh, I don’t think I’m that good! I’m just happy I can entertain all of you on a rainy night in =) Oh wow, Alaska, I really want to go there…I’ve never seen snow before…=( Hot kinky sex? Haha nice ideas you got there. Ginny will not die in my fic unless due to old age, so don’t even go there. wow, I’ve got a #1 fan!! *blushes*

Alethiana Commas? Alright, I’ll keep it in mind =) Although, I have to say, it’s also about how you read it. Since written format loses tone, so it could be a difference of reading styles that does it too.

Awen and Anasis Don’t worry, updates will be coming very very soon =) sit tight!

dracoginnyr1 Mmm yes, bad luck for Blaise huh? Draco was just waiting for the opportunity to pounce on someone hehe.

Dracomio Draco/Harry scene, was Draco the one with the upper hand? I would have thought it was the other way around, after all, it was Harry who was telling Draco off. But glad you liked it all the same.

dracosXxXgirl Don’t worry, I shall come up with something that is truly awe inspiring and you can look up at me with worshipful puppy dog eyes ^-^

Emily Hope you’ll continue to enjoy =)

Ezmerelda No!! I told you already, happy endings, happy endings, but that doesn’t mean I can’t chuck in a few twists now and then =) Actually, I sort of like Hermione a bit more since OotP, I mean granted she’s annoying as hell, but you can’t say she ain’t a smart cookie. Glad you like my descriptions of Beauxbatons and Ginny’s new robes, they took a lot of research and creation on my part. Had to go over many parts of GoF to get Fleur’s descriptions of Beauxbatons and the colours, fabrics and styles of the dress robes the chicks wore to the Yule ball. Oh and yes, basically, Draco is just stuffing them in the drawer, he’s too proud to read them. Haha, time for the old frying pan to go to work. Hehe.

frecklegirl87 Sorry frecklegirl, I haven’t had a chance to reply to you. But yes I do beta read, did you want me to help you out with something? Because I do actually have a couple of requirements before I will agree to beta read for someone, don’t worry, it’s nothing too demanding. But just so I know what I’m getting myself into. Anyway, I’ll send you an email about it.

Glacio Wow, a very insightful reader. You’re right, I do tend to go off the plot once in a while, but I like to refer to them as timeouts rather than derailing…haha. I apologize if you find it hard to follow, and yes, there are parts that are rushed because I want to get it finished and move on to better and brighter things. You have to understand, this is my first story EVER in existence which has lasted longer than ten pages. Also, the lots of cliché ideas, that’s true too, see, when I created this fic, I basically gathered up all the things I love about d/g from various fics I’ve read and worked them together into TsTr. That’s why I find it so hard to find a proper summary for this fic because it’s a mixture of everything and anything combined, it’s just an ordinary d/g fic which I hope I can write well enough to present it as an enjoyable piece of d/g. Thanks for your observations, I will work hard to improve =) please stay with me and continue to give me feedback!

Hermione Malfoy You say sappy like it’s a bad thing? Did you catch a cold? I did too, I was sick for a whole week the week before, it was very frustrating =(

Jaelyss Where have you been dear? I know, Draco’s a bitter bitter boy, but I’m hoping to get him back to normal asap. I was actually not planning on any fluff when they meet…anyway, we’ll do it my way first, and if I get complaints, then I let the fluff have free reign for a while =)

Kirixchi Yes, I want to shake Mr Malfoy hard too, but he’s being stubborn, what can I do with him? *sigh* haha, I’m with you, although I’d rather wait and see how JK is gonna get them together. Harry/Ginny is a pretty good ship, but nothing will ever beat Draco/Ginny. I’ve never seen an Audrey Hepburn movie…that’s bad right? *ducks flying tomatoes* Hey! Stop that! I’ve seen her pictures though, and no, Ginny’s not going to be all that sophisticated, but I will give her a touch of elegance just to spice things up. And nah, I think Ginny kissing Harry would be a bit much for poor Draco’s heart to handle. We don’t want him to spontaneously combust before him and Ginny get back together, now do we? =)

Awen and Anasis So let me get this straight, you are two persons right? So is Awen the only one who reviews? … haha, and no, I’m afraid Draco won’t write to Ginny. =(

knezlovesblack Okay, I understand, I’m going to rewrite the Dark Mark scene, with more detail etc. I’ll make sure to tell you when I update it =) And haha, don’t we all want a man like Draco? Oooh, some reader insight, yes I admit that Player Draco will be back in the next chapter, just for one chapter. But it’s good to see that some of my readers can actually see where this is heading. Draco’s letter will be the only piece of correspondence that you will see. I’m not really planning to show the letters Ginny writes just for the simple reason I can’t be bothered, haha, but if I get enough demands then I’ll think about it. I’m really honoured that you’d consider me a talented writer, I’m just a humble d/g shipper, really =) and I loved every bit of your review, so don’t you dare stop reviewing on me! Hehe.

Ah, a complaint about my grammar, I rarely get one of those, but I’ll be careful from now on I promise =) and as for your missing lunch and supper, I have added a technicalities page at the beginning of the story that states clearly I am not responsible for missed meals, missed TV shows or deprived sleep sessions ^-^ hehe.

palepinkrose Thank you for being such a dedicated reader of TsTr, it means much to me =)

purpledaisey Yes Lucius is aware of their relationship, but he doesn’t realise it’s more than just a physical attraction. By the way, what’s a ‘plugs’ talk? I’m afraid that Draco showing up at the Burrow to say goodbye to Ginny is out of the question, just because Draco is a stubborn arse who needs a good kick in the right direction. However, I’ll try to think of something entertaining for a Side Dish on the missing summer months, but I might not be able to get it out very soon. I’ve been attacked by various plot bunnies the past week and right now I’ve got around six unfinished one-shots to take care of, bear with me here ok? I hope you will actually enjoy Ginny and Draco’s reunion, but if you’re imagining something along the lines of all fluff, ‘I missed you love’ ‘I missed you more’, haha then you’re in for a big shock. =)

Do not even worry, Draco will not all of a sudden turn good in Year Seven, by now you should be able to trust me that I wouldn’t do something like that! Also, a battle at the school…hehe, sounds familiar, (whispers in secretive voice: it’s a part of my plot! Big pat on the back for guessing it right) Another bit of insight, yes Harry bracelet will play an important part, but not for Draco, hehe. You’ll see soon enough.

Resse Darling Haha Resse, you’re too much of a romantic. Sappy is okay once in a while, but I still believe that Draco’s letter was overly dramatic, I seriously couldn’t sit still while I was writing it, and that’s saying something! I assure you Draco will get sick of wallowing very soon, but what he reverts back to…well, I’m not guaranteeing that it’ll be enjoyable for you. Yes, Voldemort will begin to issue orders soon enough, and that will be the catalyst for the ending, so, hold your breath now! Hehe. And that’s a good question, will Draco really be able to go through with it all? It’s pretty much the central focus of the next couple of chapters. Hehe, you’re such a softie, Draco’s letter wasn’t even that emotional, I’ve read better I assure you =)

Don’t worry about a thing, Draco and Ginny will live happily ever after if I can help it. But there’ll be a couple more turns for them first, you don’t mind do yah? Makes for good reading =)

RuthieGranger Glad you loved it =) Hehe thanks for all the smilies, I can tell how much you love my fic! Lol.

Swaummy No no, Louis was just a dance partner, don’t worry there will be no love affairs with French boys, I enjoy a twist, but that’d just be blowing things out of proportion =)

Just to clear up a few things, no Draco does not read or write any letters to Ginny, he stuffs Ginny's letters in a drawer. Also, Ginny's letters will not be revealed just because I'm too lazy and they're not really important to the story, but if you're really desperate to read them, leave me a note and I'll see what I can come up with. Louis was just Ginny's dance partner, there will be no love affairs with French boys, so keep your minds at ease =) I've had two complaints about my grammar, so I shall double my efforts to edit my next chapters to make them as readable as possible! So that's all from me, until the next update then.

Happy reading!

Rea

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7th August 2003

Hi everyone, finally, I’m getting more diligent with my replies =) Anyway, fifth year has ended, and now sixth year is about to begin. I hope you will all enjoy the next couple of chapters...although I don't think I've done a very good job portraying Ginny's time at Beauxbatons, any suggestions will be greatly appreciated!

LadyAlatáriël
LiTToWeaseL
Ruthie Granger
White Tiger

1FrostB4Winter The dark mark thing was seriously evil? Haha, I’m not sure it was that dramatic! Oh well, glad you liked it =)

Awen and Anasis thank you for being patient and leaving nice reviews =) I totally agree, Hermione is totally overrated.

crazyeyes33 Well, I’m glad you enjoyed my beginnings. I want to mention once again, that this fic is foremost a romance, any angst is used to forward the plot. So if you’re an angst fan who can’t tolerate fluff, I don’t really recommend this fic for you, however, another loyal reader of mine- Jaelyss is someone who can’t stand fluff, but she still manages to put up with me, I’m hoping you can kindly do the same.

Chapter 13 – Permission?! Was about much more than just Draco writing a letter, I hope you had noticed that, or it would mean you haven’t been paying attention to the story. I’m not sure if it’s apparent or not, but in this fic I tend to create a situation and then when it is solved, I write something inconsequential so as to give the readers a breather. Such as the Sara problem, once it was solved, everyone went on holidays to cool off. Such is my writing style, Draco writing the letter served two purposes, one was of course to get the approval of Ginny’s parents, the second, was to serve as a bit of fluff to show Draco’s dedication to Ginny. I think that bit of fluff is entirely acceptable since this is a romance, but if you find it ‘silly’ then well, what can I say?

The next part of Chapter 13 was very important and anything but ‘silly’. The Trio’s acceptance of Draco is an important part of d/g relationship, and although they don’t entirely accept him, at least they know Draco’s feelings for Ginny are genuine. Draco telling off the Trio was also important and a vital part to Ginny’s development, the Trio needs to realise how they’ve been treating Ginny. The last part, with Draco and Ron having a ‘warm fuzzy moment’ was my attempt at humor so if it seems ‘silly’ to you, then I apologize, my humor has always been a bit off. Apart from that, I don’t really see anything else you could find ‘silly’ about Chapter 13, it was a rather important chapter if I do say so myself.

Now, the next issue, Ginny’s attitude and personality, I’m not quite sure what aspect you’re referring. Do you mean Ginny’s attitude toward Draco changes? Coz this is a d/g fic, isn’t that a given? Or do you mean her attitude toward her family, or Harry, or her friends? I’m not particularly sure. Ginny’s personality on the other hand, I can most assuredly say I haven’t changed it at all. In the first four years Ginny is pretty shy and infatuated with Harry, but she still has the Weasley temper and can stand up for herself most of the time. That hasn’t changed, she can still stand up for herself, and her infatuation for Harry has changed into friendship. However, she has to grow as a character and mature, so slight changes in personality and attitude are a given I’d say. If you’d like to tell me about the specifics of Ginny’s personality and attitude that you think I’ve changed, please do, I will definitely look into it.

Draconia hope you like Ginny in Beauxbatons

Enter Name I’ll let you in on a little secret, I’ve actually finished writing all the chapters for sixth year, I’m just taking my time uploading them one by one. So, why don’t you stop telling me to hurry up and write, and tell me why you gave me 8 out of 10 instead? Was it the Death Eater initiation? I’m pretty sure I made it clear that you shouldn’t hold your breathes about the Death Eater thing, Draco is going to become one no matter what. It’s what he does after that’s important.

frecklegirl87 Yes of course Ginny will go back to Hogwarts, the exchange is only for a year silly. =)

gabrielle Don’t worry, she’ll go back to him, don’t be sad =)

Hermione Malfoy Well, if you despise vernacular with a passion, then you’d better keep your eyes closed for the following chapters, because there will be a liberal dose of vernacular within every chapter for sixth year. It does seem to me that you have a lot of ‘hates’ and ‘dislikes’.

I will not have Draco doing anything of the sort, I love his body parts to bits and he will not so much as lose a hair. He will of course, deal with the situation in his own way, which I don’t guarantee you will all like.

PS I hate Hermione/Draco shippings, hadn’t you gotten the point from my Author Notes? Oh well, and once again, I remind you, you do not have to review my story on

this site if you hate it so much. Fanfiction.net is available or even fictionalley.org.

JackieFace Thank you for your support! Reading your review brought a smile to my face and warmed my heart. Hope you continue to support my fic =)

Jaelyss Argh, I’m afraid the next couple of chapters will all seem like filler chapters >,< I just can’t seem to make Ginny’s stay at Beauxbatons inspiring in any way… d’oh! But things on the Hogwarts front will get interesting =) and Player!Draco will be back, for a chapter or so, hehe so I hope you’re gonna like that =) Actually, the letter writing is kinda fluffy more than angsty….please make sure to tell me what you think of the letter, I totally trust your opinions!

I’m glad you’ve put up with me for so long, I assure you that sixth year isn’t gonna be 10+ chapters, coz the main story happens during fifth year, sixth year is like a filler year and seventh year is the ending. The way I’ve planned it, sixth year will be 4 chapters, seventh year 3 chapters and an epilogue. I hope to end the fic with 24chapters and epilogue. So yeh, the ending is gonna come very soon.

Keila there’s no particular reason why Ginny calls Draco ‘Malfoy’, lol, but yeh since everyone has been asking me that, I’ll try to rectify that in seventh year =)

Kirixchi I’m glad you like my Beauxbatons setting, I spent a long time trying to figure out how I wanted Beauxbatons to be like =) And what you said about the Death Eater scene, that was soo what I was going for! Yay, another reader who understands me =) I’m actually quite neutral when it comes to Lucius, what I do know is, I hate it how in many d/g fics Draco’s home life is in shambles and they all say how Lucius beats him up and stuff. Too much influence from the Draco Trilogies I’d say. To me, there is no way Lucius would beat up his own son, the most is maybe a chillier attitude and a strict homelife. I have no idea what Narcissa will say! I must get her to make a reappearance soon, I’m starting to miss her, we haven’t heard from her since chapter 1! Haha

Kneh13 I’ve got a couple of twists more to go, so just enjoy =)

Liz21 Glad you agree with me about Ginny going on exchange.

MaryMalfoy Do you really think my fic is original? Awww, *hugz* I’m soo glad for the reassurance. =) the thing is, I really don’t think my fic is original at all, and that’s why I can’t come up with a good summary for my fic >,< Wanna help out? Hehe. Yeah, when I say this fic is obsessively d/g only, I mean it, afterall they are the stars of the show! I’m glad you like my Pansy character development, what you wrote really sums up what I was trying to do. Haha, I get lots of reviews asking me that, well, Ginny calls Draco ‘Malfoy’ just because…to be honest, there’s no real reason. But if you read Side Dish, you’ll see how Draco corrects her =)

Purpledaisey Harry charm bracelet is going to play a very important part later on in the fic, and I think your reasoning of it is pretty much correct. You’ll see the symbolism soon, I promise =) Haha, actually, I’ve pretty much just skipped the Summer months, so sorry! Did you want to see something in particular for the Summer months? I can write another Side Dish for yah if you like. Just review and tell me what ideas you have in mind =)

Swaummy Glad to see your support! Please keep reading and reviewing =)

Undone I never realised so many people don’t like Hermione, I’ve always thought she was Little Miss Perfect that was the apple of everybody’s eye. But I’m glad you’re a diehard d/g fan, coz this is definitely a diehard d/g fic =) Keep reading and reviewing!

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26th July 2003

Hello all! Dedication time again =) I’m quite overwhelmed with all your reviews, they’re really wonderful and keep me going. =)

Please go and check out ‘Side Dish’ if you haven’t already, it’s a bit of d/g goodness branching from TsTr.

Thank you to:

Alastriona
Awen and Anasis
Cassie
Draconia
Erin
frecklegirl87
gabrielle
Jela
Krystle
LiTToWeaseL
Lord Belial
Lucy
SakuSaku1004

Your reviews make a fascinating read and brings a smile to my face every time. =)

dracoginnyr1 sketchy? Yes maybe, I’m not really sure, I only give detail when I think it’s necessary, it’s always good to leave space for the reader’s imagination. But oh well, can’t be a crowd pleaser all the time I guess. =)

Draconia Haha, your comments for each chapter are very entertaining. =) and I’m glad you love my Draco, I love him too. He’s such a dear. Hehe. I’m not actually sure how I’m gonna write Lucius’ reaction to Draco and Ginny…oh well, if worse comes to worse I’ll just skip it…haha, what an irresponsible writer I am.

Enter Name Umm, there is no way that I am going to split them up. Ever. They will be together forever. Hehe.

GracieInGreek Glad you enjoyed my Pansy, I think you describe her pretty well. And yes, Ginny and Draco, although the perfect couple, I just think that they’re one of those couples that needs to bond through tragedy, despair etc. Believe me, the twists I make them go through are for their own good, really. =)

Harry Potter Girl 10 thanks for your support!

Hermione Malfoy Ah, yes, well I hear you. If you don’t want to review this story on this site, I have this story up at ff.net and fa.org. So, keep your panties on and go review over there. k? =)

Jaelyss =) Thank you dear, your reviews really spur me on. I hate Brave New World with a passion, probably due to the ridiculous amount of times I’ve had to study it for English. I love characterization, it’s what I live for, although at times, I tend to let the plot take over, and that’s where I find I get lots of reviews saying they’re interested in hearing more from a certain person’s POV. Oh well, nobody’s perfect. *shrugs* I’m ashamed of myself for using Harry as a tool, >,< but I don’t know, I kinda like the love triangle of Harry pining after Ginny, while Draco is jealous of Ginny spending time with Harry. And Ginny being desperately annoyed at both of them. Hehe.

Yeah, actually, the reason why I put in the first four chapters as the first four books was because I didn’t want readers to think, ‘ok, she totally skipped development and jumped straight in’. I wanted to give the readers some background on d/g relationship before fifth year. I know I could have done that in flashbacks…but…I dunno, I was lazy hehe.

Kirixchi Yes I know, I’m sad about Draco’s friendlessness too, that’s why I added in Katherine. But really, he is a loner, that is why he is so attached to Ginny. I’m really bad with names, titles, anything to do with those, so yeh… sorry! Thank you for being a great reviewer =) I did actually consider revising my fic a bit to keep it out of the AU category, but then I decided that changing anything would alter my fic and I don’t really want to do that. You’re a L/N shipper, hehe that’s cute. Hmmm, I’ll see what I can do to satisfy you then. =) and really, I’m glad you enjoy my fic, it means much to me. =)

korokoro08 OK, you say you like my story but you give me a 6/10. Any particular reason?

Magi Draco’s reaction to Ginny just blew you away? In a good way or a bad way? =)

Mule It’s not what you think dear, Ginny just wants someone to talk to.

purpledaisey Does that mean you don’t think my Malfoy is kept in character? Is he…too nice for you?

Resse Darling haha I know, we can’t have Draco thinking he’s the dominant partner in this relationship can we? wink*wink. I reckon Draco is very much in love with Ginny, but also very insecure because of his love. She is like his everything, his survival from himself, but he feels that he isn’t Ginny’s everything. She’s got her family and Harry and Hermione, she’s got friends who love her, and then she’s got him. So he’s insecure, and jealous, which in turn leads to anger and lashing out, which we all know Draco is good at doing, (damn that quick tongue of his, hehe)

saturnsworld Haha, actually, I think Pansy is intelligent in her own bimbo-ish way. Sorta like Elle in ‘Legally Blonde’, but not that good. Haha. Yes, I totally agree that Draco is a gentleman at heart. =)

sexytexy I’m glad you like my story, and I’m sorry you disagree with my pairing of R/Hr, but like I said, it’s not the focus of the story, and there won’t be anymore mentions. However, anymore flames (and yes, I consider giving me a 5/10 for my shipping choice to be a flame) from you, and I’ll make sure to have R/Hr snogging in every corner of the school imaginable.

And yes, I am Australian, well, I’m azn actually, but yeh. And hell no! I ain’t crazy, I did Adv English and that’s it. I hate English with a passion, probably because all the teachers in the English faculty were pathetic spinster-cows with a big stick stuck up their ass! However, I did do 4u Math though…

ZilverFaerie Is Draco oc? Sorry about that. and I forgive you, for not reviewing often. But hey, you know what to do from now on! hehe.

Rea

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28th June 2003

Sorry everyone, I'm not used to acknowledging reviews after each chapter, so I like to do it just all in one go. But thanks for supporting me and I hope you'll all keep following this even after OotP. =) Oh, and you'll all find the previous dedication below this one, I decided to combine it so that it doesn't seem like I have too many chapters =)

You know, I'm surprised you all think Pansy is going to do something evil to Ginny. I mean, I've hinted that there's going to be character development on Pansy haven't I? Oh well, I'll leave you all to decipher it out =)

Thank you to:

athena
crysybell
Faye Grant (The Southern Belle
GABRIELLE
Mule

Your reviews are very much appreciated =)

Alastriona vegetablePansy? Hahaha oh dear, well, you’ll find out just how un-vegetable she is next chapter =)

Batgirl1801 haha why does everyone hate Pansy? Oh well, too bad I didn’t make Blaise a girl; we could have a scene with a gathering of Slytherin chicks, now that would be drama! =)

Cassie I update pretty much regularly, every week, so I think that’s often compared to some writers who update once a month! Lol you’re the only one who doesn’t have a problem with the cliffy haha *glomps*

Clair I agree that it’d be better if they were older, but I really want to stick to the seven-year time frame so…anyway, you’ll see later =) And a family+family dinner? Haha no way, my thoughts on it as exactly as Ginny says: ‘They’d be at each other’s throats before the sugar and milk were added’ =)

Darkmorning Ahhh, I just love technicalities hehe, it really shows you’re reading my story and absorbing it =) Well, let’s just say that Mrs Weasley wrote a letter to Ginny as well and since they only have one owl, she sent both the letters to Ginny and told her to pass it on to Draco. How’s that? ^-^

dracoginnyr1 One update for one review huh? =) I update around once a week so I won’t keep you hanging for too long ok?

GracieInGreek haha, alright alright, H/Hr it is then =) I think it’s very irresponsible of me, but I don’t read anything in fan fiction that isn’t d/g. Well, unless it’s the work of somebody I’m beta-ring for.

Hermione Malfoy I’m sorry, who’s Jamie? *confused* I apologize for the fluffiness hehe Another fluff-hater I see, well, it’s a Romance, it’s bound to have fluff, but I will try to keep a reign on it ok?

Oh dear, I don’t actually mind flames so long as the person is brave enough to leave a proper name and probably their email so I can explain it to them. But most flames I get are signed by anonymous with a brief one-liner and no return address.

The most interesting review I’ve received for this story was at ff.net. The review was something like:

Reviewer – ‘…’

Review – ‘you've set this for when draco is beginning year one. Ginny should not be in the story...as she hasn't started school yet.’

And the whole world just comes crashing down around me after I read that. I mean, it’s enough that they didn’t bother to read the entire chapter properly or even move on to the second chapter to verify anything, but to actually post that and run away without a reply address. Tsk tsk. Don’t you agree?

Frying pan of death? Haha that’s funny.

I must say, the ‘good pairings’ as you put it, really turn my stomach. I hate Draco/Harry, and even the queen of fan fiction CC hasn’t been able to change my mind on it, and Draco/Hermione, urgh, reading the Draco Trilogy, I want to go at her with a sledgehammer for just being so damn perfect. Begins chant: Ginny! Ginny! Ginny! Anyway, Hermione/Ron is fine with me, and I don’t go for slash, but if it’s your thing then…

I think you should give this site a go, there’s quite a lot of talented authors who post here, but yeh, oh well, save it for a rainy day I suppose =)

Jaelyss I know, there’s actually quite a lot more fluff than I expected to put in it, but then, I keep excusing myself by saying that this is a Romance =) I will try to restrain myself from the fluff, but yeh, it tends to creep in when it feels appropriate for it to make an appearance, much to my dismay >,<

Lilyflower017 Spelling did you say? I’ll make sure to check it out, thanks =) I’m here to convince you that D/G is a wonderful ship. haha Flame? Keep which relationship up? I’m confused, you mean the R/Hr shipping?

Lisette hehe glad you like the title, took me a while and I kept thinking it was too long to be a proper title, oh well =)

Liz21 Glad you liked the letter, it actually didn’t take that long to write, but it did take a lot of thought for him to sound just arrogant enough to be a Malfoy and yet have that pleading tone to show he is genuinely seeking their permission =)

Miss Em *blushes* Glad you’re enjoying it, hope you continue to review =)

NymphGirl Don’t worry, next chapter will be out within the week =) Haha, finally somebody agrees with me that Crabbe and Goyle hitting on Ginny would be a very disturbing thought =)

Resse Darling I liked the death threat part too =) Actually now that you mention it, I think the one where he had to write to Percy, that was the fic I read…but I can’t remember the title. *shrugs*

Riyue You like the humor? Awww, hehe I’m very bad at it, much better at dramatics I’d say =)

silverhawk Haha, actually after reading OotP I’ve changed my mind, I can actually see H/Hr happening, and haha poor Ron/Luna. It’s good you’re enjoying my fic =)

Love all,

Rea

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Dedication to reviewers 5th June

I’m so sorry my dear reviewers for not acknowledging you guys in so long!! I’ve had a million things to do, and my exams are coming up =( So here is my dedication to you guys, if you can’t find your name here, remember to send me a howler ok? ^-^

Jaelyss: Thank you so much for telling me about this site! I actually hadn’t heard of it before you mentioned it to me! I’m so happy you’re following my fic and giving me reviews constantly!! *hugz*

Yes I’m pretty sure Draco wants to sleep with her, but umm that’s not exactly what that thought was supposed to mean, it was just like he didn’t purposely be nice to her because he wanted to sleep with her…anyway doesn’t matter. I don’t know why I bothered with the H/G scene, I guess I just want to make sure that the reason Ginny got over Harry is obvious and explained you know?

Did you like the scene when Draco gave back Ginny’s necklace? It took me a while, because I didn’t want to make it so fluffy that you would gag but then it had to be sweet as well … player!Draco will be back I promise, the bit with Katherine is just an entrée my dear, but you’ll have to wait a few chapters ok? ^-^

I’m glad you liked the sex scene etc, and trust me, I’m not big on fluff myself, hope it wasn’t too much. Yes, >,< that means Ginny lost her virginity at 14, I seriously am very sorry about that, but I really can’t change the timeslot so …

You don’t like Katherine?? =( I love Katherine, haha ok well, I should really put in my author notes where I get some of my inspiration from, well Katherine is from the movie Cruel Intentions, you know Sara Michelle Gellar? But only her charming part, not her bitchy part. Let me explain more about Katherine’s character since we won’t be seeing any more of her. Remember how she’s a sixth-year? So she’s more experienced with this whole love and lust thing, and she’s cool about it without being a mean gossiping bitch, that’s why Draco asks her about it. I can’t imagine Draco being that broody and introverted, only about Death Eater stuff you know? Like the really serious, dark things that he doesn’t believe anyone would understand.

Oh PS I think I wrote a reply to your review at ff.net, so go check that out too if you have time =) it should be under dedication to reviewers…the second one…or maybe the first… I can’t remember =P

angela: You are evil!! Haha, well no I didn’t even think of breaking Sara’s leg while she was skiing. I’m hoping not to ruin any friendships in this fic, so yah, Sara and Ginny will still be buddy buddies in the end, hopefully… I reckon Sara’s characterization is a bit strange throughout the fic…but oh well, *shrugs*

Clair: Do you want Ginny to have a make-over? She will, but umm not for a ball, and not anytime soon, probably 5-7chapters later…keep reading? Thx!

angl: Haha, how could you hate d/g ships? They’re the best haha, which fic inspired you to change your mind?

ennui: hope you’re following my fic and enjoying it! Review more! That way I’ll know what you liked and didn’t like

psyche752: Haha, I have no idea what the scene in the Great Hall is supposed to be about, but I decided that Draco should have some fun, he’s been having a rough time lately after all =) And yes I apologize for the R/Hr hint, but like I said, it’s not relevant in the story, so don’t get angry!

GracieInGreek: Firstly, what’s a smutfic? O__o Well I’m pretty sure it will stay within pg13, but I’m going to give it an R rating just in case, I mean seriously, who’s going to be affected by the rating??

Umm yes they are, its just a purely sexual relationship. I can’t really imagine Draco having a best friend…lol Katherine is just someone he sleeps with, but he just thought he’d ask her since she is female and older, so she’d probably be able to give him advice.

I read through my chapters again, but I can’t seem to find any repetition of words? I’m pretty sure if there was it was supposed to be repeated…I try to at least triple check my work before I post it since I don’t like using betas. And glad you like the D/G scene =)

Magi: Keep reading! And please submit reviews so I know what you liked about my chapters! Thank you for reviewing constantly!!

Batgirl: Thank you for correcting me on that one!! I can’t believe I called her a muggle!! >,< I’m so embarrassed, haha hope you’ve been reading and reviewing!! hint*hint Hmm, I don’t know if you’re a big fan of redeemed!Draco…but it’s not going to happen here…well not in the way you people expect…if at all…I’m sorry! But trust me ok? Just keep reading =)

anonymous: Errr, you know, Draco’s visit to Harry on the train completely slipped my mind… sorry! Naughty me.

Julia: Well…I’m sorry, but their first kiss is anything but romantic…=( Don’t worry, I’ll make it up to you later on =) There’ll be at least a few fluffy scenes involved, but I don’t really like writing details like that. ie I will not detail sex scene, or kissing scenes for that matter. Only vaguely, it’s always best for the reader to imagine it in their own minds =)

CherryBerry: Review more!

Resse Darling: Well the thing is, I’ve got this friend who’s been reading my fic, not really beta-ring it for me coz he’s worse at English than I am, but just coz I sent him the first few chapters and he got hooked. So he was pretty shocked at the sex scene, and I quote ‘THEY HAD SEX??!!! OMG!’ So if a guy is saying this to me, I thought it’d be pretty shocking to most readers, that’s why I put in the author notes. You know how people are, they expect the first kiss, first night together to be romantic and sweet and fluffy etc

Haha, sorry to keep you guys on cliffies about those two for so long, but I assure you that they’ll get together, very soon! And don’t worry, Draco won’t try to take it back or anything, once he sets his mind on something, he won’t quit till he gets it =) Don’t you like Sara? Can’t blame you, but I assure you that Sara’s only doing what she thinks is best for Ginny, even if it doesn’t seem that way… =)

sita: Umm…what?? I had no idea what your review was about… sorry…

memyselfandI: I’m glad you’re reading it =) But it’d be lovely to get some feedback… oh well, I’ll settle on the chapter hits I guess… =)

Liz21: I’m glad you love my fic! Thanks for your support, and thank you for trusting me, I promise I won’t disappoint you! Keep reviewing!

Acaciah: ^-^ Hope you keep reading!!

Emma: Glad you like the story! Hope you review more =)

If there's anything in the fic that you don't understand or find confusion or think could be written better, please tell me, I'll definitely look into it =)

Love you all!

Rea



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