***Nursie Note*** Hey there!!! I know you would rather have an updated chapter, sorry for that. I needed to post this so that I could at least apologize for the long wait you are having. There are a few reviews I would like to respond to one that I accidently deleted when not paying attention with the reply button. *lol*
Name: mugglemike[signed]
Review: OK, I\'m completely confused right about now. I suggest you use
---------- when changing from scene to scene, its less confusing that way and clearer. From what I understood you\'ve got Harry\'s son taking revenge on him or something. And whats with all the raping? You\'ve got an incopetent profesor, and Dumbledore is amazingly clueless to everything thats going on.Really confusing. I agree there shoudl be twists and stuff, but this just threw me of completly.I seriously suggest the scene breaks though.
Mugglemike, After a discussion with my beta people, this is what we decided to go with on commenting for this particular review. First of all... Thank you for the review. Your suggestion for using ------- for scene breaks. I'm sorry, I won't be able to accomodate that request because it's just simply not used in writing. Case in point, have you even seen JKR use one of these in her books? No, she doesn't, usually an extra space is all that is needed. However, I know I have had problems in the past with my line spacing, but that is because of the software program that I was using at the time, so I hope to have it rectified in the next update. Yes, you've understood correctly, Harry's son is getting revenge on him, it will be explained later. As for the adult sexual nature, if it disturbs you, then I suggest that you stop reading it, because my fic is rated NC-17 forthat reason. Yes, Dumbledore in canon is very aware of things going on, but this is my take on Dumbledore so put up with it, or stop reading. As for it threw you for a loop, well, that's what it was supposed to do. It's not supposed to be easy for you to figure out what's going on.
Ok, with that said, I would actually like to get a review that made me cry. In a good way I promise. Mr. MuggleMike seems to be the only one I've confused to the extent he is. Oh well, can't win 'em all right.
Reviewer:Name: Fandry[signed]
Review: I am new to this site and only read stories that are over 100k words and take place in 6th or 7th year so far. I was a little worried about if I would enjoy this story since it is so orginal but I have to admit that so far I do. This story so far has been one of the darkest and most sad stories that I have read (not that it is a bad thing...and also it is not finished yet so im sure it will have it\'s joys too). I read all the chapters up to this one all in one day, this story caught me just like the JKR ones did, I just could not put it down hehe.
Fandry, I can't tell you how much your review means to me. Less is more in this case... I luv you!!! *sniffle*
Now I feel like Sally Field when she won her Oscar. "You like me... You really like me"
Alrighty then, enough of that. Thank you everyone else that is reading this. I appreciate your comments greatly. I am sorry about not having an update when I promised once a week, but right now, I am having a few more than a few issues with editing. Not that I can't write for the fic, it's just stressin me out. In more ways than one. I am just about ready to post Part 10 once I finally decided what to do with it. Anywho, I hope you hang on here for me, I promise I won't disappoint you when I finally get things sorted out. You NC-17 people should be content here pretty soon. I know I was writing it. =P
Hugs
Nursie