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Harry-Hermione: Legendary Love

coolman

AN: Here is the 'extra stuff' that I'd promised to post earlier. It's nothing much but I hope you all will enjoy this bit of fun. I'm flattered by the response I've got on this story and this my way to express my gratitude to all of you. There is another note at the end of this chapter. Be sure to read it. Wishing you all a very Happy Easter.

Appendix

This is a song I came upon on the net. I've never heard it but to my delight it fitted the story perfectly including the title. So I couldn't help not including it in the story. A couple of lines have been changed to fit the story. Enjoy……

Legendary Love:

You fill my heart with desire
I know I'd give my life for you
Let me feel the passion in your arms
Lying by your side, the whole night through
I need you? Forever
Even though we'll face challenges aplenty,
It's worth living for
Here with me is where you belong

I'd pay the price a thousand times to share my life with you
I'd hold you close and never let you go
'cos I feel I've always known you
You're the one I've been dreaming of
You are my destiny
And this will be a legendary love

I confess I took a chance

Of wishing you were mine

I came to love my destiny

Time will never change the way I feel
No-one else can love you more
What we have is worth fighting for

I'd pay the price a thousand times to share my life with you
I'd hold you close and never let you go
'cos I feel I've always known you
You're the one I've been dreaming of
You are my destiny
And this will be a legendary love

'cos I feel I've always known you
You're the one I've been dreaming of
You are my destiny
And this will be a legendary love

-by Beverly Craven

Now to something totally different - While writing the story I used to make notes for each chapter. At a time I did up to four chapters. After the story finished I found it very interesting to go through them. Of course I'd made several changes in them through the story. I may have added something extra in the story or missed something in the notes. Had all the changes been visible it would have been even more interesting. But thanks to modern technology I have the option of erasing. The file of these rough notes played a major part in my being able to complete the story. So I'm pasting these notes below. A horizontal line will indicate the set of chapters for which I made notes in one sitting. For example the line after chapter three indicates I first made the notes for chapters one to three, then wrote and posted them before making the notes for next couple of chapters. So here they are.

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Chapter 1: Concerned Parents

Talk with Hermione

Not going back to Hogwarts

Cut off from magical world

Letter to Harry, indifference

Flashback 1

Phone call

Flashback 2

Dream

Phone call again

Chapter 2: No More Waiting

The rescue

Peter's revelations

Granger's recovery

Harry staying with Hermione

No more waiting

Discovery about prime horcrux

Plan to end Voldemort

Conversation with Wormtail

Hermione's assurances

Chapter 3: The Final Battle

Journey to the Riddle House

Interactions with deatheaters

Changing back

Face to face with Voldemort

Priori Incantatem

Disarming, Animagus, Crucio

Flashback 3

The kill

Escape

Soul burning

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Chapter 4: Normality Returns

Spreading the news

Breakup with Ginny

Bill's wedding

Plans of Hogwarts

Granger's return home

Talk with Hermione

The small but surprise birthday party

Diagon Alley, Ron/Hermione

Another talk

Back to Hogwarts

Chapter 5: Life Goes On

New faculty

Head boy and Head girl, separate room

DADA classes

Snape's news from McGonagall

Quidditch tryouts, Harry/Ron/Hermione talk

Ron/Hermione scene

Announcement of Halloween Ball, finding dates

Harry's reluctance, going with Luna

First match, Ron/Hermione interaction

The first fight

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Chapter 6: From Bad to Worse

Hermione's talk with Harry

The patch up

The Halloween Ball

Luna's revelations

Harry's description, realization

Felix Felices (no)

Trip to Hogsmede

Another argument

Ron uncovered

Harry knows the truth

Breakup

Chapter 7: A Harsh Lesson for Ron

Ron/Hermione argument

Harry intervenes, Harry/Ron talk

Lavender, Parvatis's entry, Parvati's revelations

Ron isolated, talk with Remus

Luna learns truth, talks to Harry

Hermione in depression, letter, talk with Harry

Food fight

Reply of letter

Harry/Ron at quidditch practice

Ron eavesdrops on Remus/Tonks

Dream

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Chapter 8: Getting Closer

Harry's feelings

Luna's talk with Ron

Hogsmede visit, Christmas shopping

Pre NEWTs, study sessions

Near revelation

Fun in the snow

Ron's goodbye, another talk with Luna

Harry Hermione getting closer

Christmas plans at Hogwarts

Harry watching Hermione

Change of mind

Chapter 9: My Heart Will Go On

Christmas Eve morning, sending gifts out

Sneaking away to Hogsmede, Date

Celebrations at Hogwarts

Back to Head's quarters, asking, together at last

Christmas morning, opening gifts

Near the lake, first kiss, Reactions

Christmas lunch with teachers, the others know

James/Lily carving

Private supper at Head's quarters

Late night chat, surprise desert

Content

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Chapter 10: Questions Answered

Talk begins

Harry post sixth year

Harry after Halloween ball

Hermione third year

Hermione fourth year

Hermione fifth year

Hermione sixth year

Hermione post sixth year

Declaration of Love

Hat/Quill talk

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Chapter 11: Second Chance

Ron at the Burrow, letter from Luna

Ron/Luna meeting, chat

Eve teasing, Ron to the rescue

Comforting, meeting Mr. Lovegood

Quibbler, Ron's second chance

Invitation to visit Luna

Ginny's apology

Harry, Hermione with the Quibbler

Welcome back Ron, telling truth to Ron

Harry/Ron talk about Luna

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Chapter 12: An Unwanted Visitor

Second quidditch match, Harry/Hermione interaction

Letter from Cho, Harry's anger

Insecurity for Hermione, talk with Harry, assurances

Arrival of Cho, Harry's polite refusal

Cho's thoughts, dream

Cho's attempted friendship with Hermione

Hermione's discussion with Harry and Ron

Night time stroll, Cho follows

Hagrid's discovery, Hermione's investigation

McGonagall's order, partner for Cho

Training with Harry, injury feigning

Chapter 13: Manipulation and Consequence

Training again, Evening snacks

Harry's talk with Luna, Cho spies

Manipulation with the Penseive

Photos spread around, Hermione's belief in Harry

Ron talks to Luna, kiss, apology, asks for time

Harry/Hermione's first anniversary in London

Gift from Hermione

Cho trying to get to Harry, but failing

Ginny tells way, McGonagall's fireplace, snooping

Ron/Luna finally get together

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Chapter 14: All about Couples

Ron/Luna's news out

Ron's talk to Lupin

Cho's talk with Marietta, Plans

Pre Valentines hook ups

Boy's night out at Hogs Head

Gifts for Valentines Day

Decision of no special celebrations

Special Valentines Day

Cho spies again and gets caught

Chapter 15: The Turn towards Evil

Harry/Hermione talk to Cho

Cho in a desperate situation, turns to evil

Research in Library, slavery spell

Luna catches Cho in Library, tells others

Practices, Plan to put it on Hermione

Quidditch with Harry, Cho takes leave

Cho gets to Hermione, asks for help

Casting of spell and trial

Cho tells the truths to Hermione

Hermione meets Harry

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Chapter 16: Darkness Everywhere

Hermione tells Harry, disbelief

Hermione avoids everyone, Luna tries

Harry/Ron/Luna talk, Hermione overhears

Hermione depressed, Dream

Nightly visit to Cho, pleading, threat

Harry tries his luck, fails

Harry in terrible state

Hermione's thoughts, pain

Harry sees empty bed, investigates

Hermione caught, lies

Chapter 17: Busted!

Harry prays, Hermione hears, watches, cries

Harry catches Cho, threatens

Ron/Luna scene, talk about Harry/Hermione

Cho tells Hermione about future plans

Cho moves in on Harry, Hermione watches

Harry attempts again to talk, magic, truth

Plan to catch Cho red handed, McGonagall, Lupin told

Plan works to perfection, Cho under arrest

Together again, romantic moment

Move in proposal

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Chapter 18: Home Sweet Home

Hermione's response, holiday plans

Cho's trial, Marietta

Stay with the Granger's, Approval

Robert talks to Harry

Settling at Leaky Cauldron

House hunting, choice, expenditure

Finalizing deal, being in own house, night stay

Shopping, taste conflicts, solution

Furnishing, Kreacher arrives

Talk about marriage, sex, etc.

Back to Hogwarts

Chapter 19: Farewell

Final Quidditch match, speech by Harry

Final Hogsmede visit

Final classes of each subject, Prep leave

NEWTs

Results, Career options, Discussions

Gloom sets in as the end nears

Farewell party

The last morning, goodbyes

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Chapter 20: An Unexpected Problem

Ron's response, Journey back, Station

Change of mood in seeing the house

First day, night and decision

18 month gap, Christmas at Peaceden

Hermione not well, throwing up, suspected flu

Hermione reads, realizes implications, muggle tests

Harry hears the truth, thought goes in

Hermione's relief short lived, agrees to Harry

Meeting with Dr. Bones, change of mind

Back home, Hermione tells Harry

Chapter 21: Plenty of Talks

Harry's outrage, argument pursues

No solution reached, postponement, next morning

Parting of ways, change of bedroom

Harry's talk with Ron and Luna

Hermione's talk with Neville and Ginny

Bill and Fleur at Peaceden, baby

Photos, Harry and Hermione's reaction

Room turned upside down, fight again

Neville's talk with Harry

Chapter 22: Love Can't Die

Harry comes home, cooks, dinner with Hermione

Feelings return, kiss, turn away

Hermione's request, Harry meets Dr. Bones, Susan

Susan explains things to Harry, visuals

Change of mind, no fear, kisses Susan

Hermione walks in, Trouble

Hermione not at home, Panic, Harry's guess

Meeting Hermione, Explanations

Acceptance, Shopping, telling Grangers, Dinner together

Proposal

Chapter 23: Legendary Love

Wedding night, happiness, postponed Honeymoon

Birth of triplets, happiness again

Names, Godparents, coming home

Leave from work, Harry's part time work offer

All is well, Ten year jump

Chat between the four kids, Argument

Fun together, Discussion about Christine

Quidditch

Nick asks question to siblings, meaning of Legendary

Legendary love

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Hope that was a quick recap of the story! Lastly I'd like to take this chance to thank all the readers. Writing this story has been a wonderful experience for me. Right from November to April I've spent long hours thinking how this story can move ahead and maintain its originality. I've loved every bit of the journey. I hope all of you have had a memorable experience too. There were some parts which weren't easy to write. Mainly the brief Ron-Hermione relationship and Harry and Hermione's disagreement over the abortion. I had to face a lot of stick for those in the reviews. However sometimes you have to go against popular demand to help the plot.

This story finished exactly a year after my last story 'Something Happens When You Are In Love'. During this year a lot has changed in my writing and I'd like to share a few statistics between the two stories to emphasize this. I'm using SHWYAIL and HHLL as short forms. Sorry for the poor formatting but this was the best I could manage within the limitations of Portkey.

Type: SHWYAIL: Based on movie, HHLL: Original

Words: SHWYAIL: 18806, HHLL: 86699 (Before Appendix)

Reviews: SHWYAIL: 72, HHLL: 482 (Before Appendix)

Hits: SHWYAIL: 24999, HHLL: 62185 (Before Appendix)

Chapters: SHWYAIL: 16, HHLL: 23 (Before Appendix)

Words/Chapter: SHWYAIL: 1175.375, HHLL: 3769.521

Reviews/Chapter: SHWYAIL: 4.5, HHLL: 20.956

Reviews/1000 words: SHWYAIL: 3.828, HHLL: 5.559

Reviews/1000 hits: SHWYAIL: 2.88, HHLL: 7.751

Max Reviews: SHWYAIL: 9 (Chapter 15), HHLL: 41 (Chapter 1)

(Excl. 1st Chapter): SHWYAIL: 9 (Chapter 15), HHLL: 30 (Chapter 21)

Min Reviews: SHWYAIL: 1 (Chapter 3), HHLL: 12 (Chapter 7)

This shows a positive trend! I'm really happy that all of you have been so appreciative of my work. A special mention for all the reviewers. This story wouldn't have been a success without your support. Your kind words were sources of motivation during a writer's block, hints to what I should write, caution against what I should not prolong unnecessarily and a great sense of satisfaction.

As for me, due to my busy schedule I'm going to be unable to write anymore. I hope it will ease up in a few months. So there are no plans for a sequel or a new story. If and when I do write again it'll be something totally new. One thing you can be sure of is that it'll be Harry/Hermione. With that I'd like to bid you farewell, at least for now. Once again a big thank you to everyone.

With Best Wishes,

coolman.